Poems - Share 'em!

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Okay, I FINALLY wrote a decent poem that wasn't for school. It's not very good, but enjoy~

Lurve it! I wrote a poem awhile back, it SUCKED!

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BubblyKristin wrote:

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Okay, I FINALLY wrote a decent poem that wasn't for school. It's not very good, but enjoy~

Lurve it! I wrote a poem awhile back, it SUCKED!

Lol, nice. xD Anywho, thanks. ^^

Welcome! I cant make poems.

That was awesome!!!

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Thank you. ^-^

You are very welcome

I love your poems, Moon (You said we could call you that, right? XD)

I used to be able to write poems...But now it's like I can't. I haven't tried in awhile though, I'll try later. xD

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AshleyxApplesauce wrote:

I love your poems, Moon (You said we could call you that, right? XD)

I used to be able to write poems...But now it's like I can't. I haven't tried in awhile though, I'll try later. xD

Thanks. And yesh, call me Moon. ^^

Before, I couldn't write poems before...or draw...or write decently...but now I can do all! 8D

I can probably draw decently. Idk.

I don't have any artistic/ writing talent what-so-ever anymore... I used to in elementary school when I was creative... but not no more. :/
If i get bored one day I'll try. lol

sucky, i know.

whiskers12cat wrote:

-Rain-
I hear the rain pound the plains
Pounding hard, reminding me of pains
I feel the sorrow blaze my scars
The only light I have, is in the stars.

I only wish one thing
That happiness would ring
But instead its a world of darkness
Making my eyes open less and less.

If only the tears would stop
If only the hate would drop
If only the sun would shine
Someday, after my time...

sucky, i know.

THAT WAS AWESOME! you have a talent!

I just found my poetry notebook!
I made a poem about two weeks ago, and I wanted to share it, and now I can.
But I have to wait until my brother's friend leaves 'cause I don't want him to see it. XD

AshleyxApplesauce wrote:

I just found my poetry notebook!
I made a poem about two weeks ago, and I wanted to share it, and now I can.
But I have to wait until my brother's friend leaves 'cause I don't want him to see it. XD

lol i just woke up at 11:30 so no ones home.

Here it is. Pfft, not the greatestt, but I haven't written in awhile. I've been too happy, and for some reason, I can't write poetry when I'm happy. But when I wrote this I was pissed, so yeah (:
I dunno what this is called, so I'm gonna have to think of a title of the tippy top of my little head. XD
Uh, it's gonna be called, "Too Late". Yeah, that works. Now, enough of my silly rambling, I shall get to the poetry. XD

Just lettin' you know, my style of poetry has changed greatly. I don't really ryhme anymore.

Too Late
By: Ashley Calva, or AshleyxApplesauce, and if you try to copy this, I will rip your throat out<3
One breath and she's gone.
The girl once happy and full of life,
She fell apart.
Why?
She loved you, you hurt her.
The scars she makes may mean nothing to you,
But to her they remind her of what she's become,
And what you've done.
The girl once so cheerful and full of engery,
She broke down.
Now she's gone.
Every apology you've saved up means nothing now.
She's gone, it's too late.

Tell me what you think. I personally don't think it's half bad.<3

...I think Dew Drop is gone period.

I REALLY LIKE YOUR POEM. ALOT. I'm serious, Kitty. Haha.

And I used to write poetry, like, two years ago. I write songs now.